Thursday, August 30, 2018

Week 2 Story: The Crocodile and the Proud Primate

The Crocodile and the Proud Primate
A Retelling of The Crocodile and Monkey Jatakas

            Long ago, in a time before Man, animals ruled the jungle lands. It was a peaceful and prosperous era in which all creatures ate only plants for food. Even the mightiest of beasts, the great Lion, feasted only on fruits and nuts. But because all animals cannot reach the high branches of the fig tree, Monkey was tasked with retrieving foods for everyone to eat. With his light frame and long fingers, Monkey was able to pluck all kinds of fruits from the forest, and all of the animals were very grateful to him.
Unfortunately, with such notoriety, Monkey grew to be quite vain.
One day, he overheard a conversation between Rabbit and Owl.
“Say, Owl!” Rabbit cried, “You see all from your travels about. Who is the handsomest creature of the forest?”
Owl thought a long time before responding; “From what I can see, all of the animals in the kingdom are handsome, but surely the handsomest of all is the Crocodile, for his smile is the most wide.”
Jealous, Monkey began to swing rapidly through the forest.
“Am I not the handsomest?” he thought. “ Do I not give all creatures food to eat? Surely they can see how handsome I am. How ungrateful! Crocodile does not deserve any recognition. He merely lays about in the river all day.”
Caught up in his thoughts, Monkey misstepped and fell from a tall branch onto the forest floor, landing in the rotting remains of a nearby fruit tree. Sitting up, Monkey was struck with an idea.
“I know how I’ll get back at Crocodile! He can’t smile if he’s sick from bad fruit!” With that, Monkey returned home and waited for the next morning, when he would again share food with the rest of the animal kingdom.
Two days later, upon swinging by the river, Monkey heard his name being called. It was Crocodile!
“Please” he said, “my wife is very sick, and only you can help.” Crocodile knew of Monkey’s experience with all of the plants of the forest, and was desperate for Monkey to pluck a fruit from the Healing Tree. This Tree was sacred, and only Monkey dared climb its branches. All of the animals knew the fruits were precious to him, and called them Healing Hearts because of their shape and medicinal qualities.
“Please.” begged Crocodile, “My wife is dying and I can’t reach the branches.” Still jealous, Monkey fetched one of the fruits and returned to brag, swinging gleefully over the river on vines, flaunting his superiority.
“Look Crocodile! Am I not more strong, more swift, and more handsome?” With this he tossed the fruit from hand to hand and continued to taunt agonized Crocodile. Desperate, Crocodile stretched his nose up as high as he could, reaching and reaching for the Healing Heart. His nose grew very long, but still he could not reach. Still gloating but growing wary of Crocodile’s snout, Monkey, ever envious, opened his mouth and swallowed the fruit in one bite.

Enraged, Crocodile replied “If I can’t have a Healing Heart, I can at least have YOURS.” And with that he leapt from the water and swallowed Monkey in one gulp. And thus the peace of the forest was broken as news of Crocodile’s act spread to the other sharp-toothed animals, who, without Monkey, began to resort to eating other creatures to sate their hunger. So it was that the carnivores began to eat meat and the Crocodile’s snout grew long. And the Monkey, for his envy, vanity, and pride, obtained only an early end.

Author's Note: The two Jatakas with the similar Crocodile/Monkey dynamics stuck out to me among the many stories, as did the prompt "tell the story from the villain's point of view". Specifically I remembered the Crocodile's wife saying (rather melodramatically) that she would die if she did not get Monkey's heart. In hopes of expanding and explaining her ailment, I definitely made a few tweaks, including that of the Healing tree and food-gathering role of Monkey. I also did my best to embrace the Native American approach of integrating the origins of signature animal features and mannerisms throughout. Hopefully it's as fun to read as it was to write!
Image Info: Saltwater Crocodile in India
Source: https://ipfs.io/ipfs/QmXoypizjW3WknFiJnKLwHCnL72vedxjQkDDP1mXWo6uco/wiki/Saltwater_crocodile.html


Bibliography:

The Crocodile and the Monkey's Heart
The Crocodile in the River

8 comments:

  1. Hi Brenna,

    I enjoyed reading your story of the crocodile and the primate. It is clear to the reader that you had fun writing this piece, as it was very fun to read. Telling the story from the villain’s point of view is a very unique interpretation. You definitely have a talent for storytelling and creativity. I look forward to reading more as the semester progresses.

    -Andy McDowell

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  2. Hi Brenna,

    I really like the way you tell stories, it felt like I was reading a story from a very famous book. Now getting back to the story, it was really clever the way you used the characters. I definitely enjoyed reading this story, it was short and sweet. I like the changes you made from the Jatakas. Can’t wait to read more!

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  3. Hi Brenna,
    Your story was really well written. The story of how animals started eating each other was a very compelling angle to take with the original story. I really liked how you weren't afraid to alter the personality of the monkey and craft a new one. Still, your emphasis on the monkey's virtuous failings really tied back to the roots the story, which was also nice.

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  4. Hi Brenna, this is an interesting story because it explains why certain animals are predisposed to different foods. I think it is very well written- it felt like it was straight out of the Jatakas Anthology, and I really enjoyed the explanations you give for why monkey acted that way in the first place.

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  5. Hi Brenna, I really enjoyed reading your story. I also chose to write about the crocodile and monkey, but I like that you added motive and substance behind the actions of both the monkey and the crocodile. Contrary to the original story, you had me rooting for the crocodile. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Great job!
    Haley

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  6. Hey Brenna! I really enjoyed reading up on how the animals are as we know them today. Your way of writing was very entertaining and gave me good visuals of what was taking place.. it was almost like I was there with the animals while all of this was taking place! I was actually kind of saddened by the poor crocodile's wife. What happened to her, did she end up making it and was she sick because Monkey made her sick on accident instead of his original crocodile like he had planned on?

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  7. Hey Brenna!
    I really enjoyed the story you created of “The Crocodile and the Primate.” This is a piece that to the reader I can tell you had fun writing it. It was very intriguing and interesting how you told the story from the antagonist’s point of view, and it worked because it kept me hooked. I look forward to reading your future stories!

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  8. Hey Brenna,
    I really enjoyed reading your story. I love how in your story we are looking at the animals and seeing how they are doing today. It is a unique perspective that was very interesting to read about. I look forward to seeing more of your stories

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